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Sometimes
When I'm feeling lonely
I d r e a m.
Dream of flying...
flying
f a r
away.
To where the clothes on the line don't w a v e in the wind
And clouds part when you step out your door
Somewhere nice and relaxing
A place of honey l o v e, and strawberry hearts
Of blueberry temptation
And raspberry thoughts
Somewhere f r e e and easy...like when you're fast asleep
I suppose that's why I like to dream.
When I'm feeling lonely
I d r e a m.
Dream of flying...
flying
f a r
away.
To where the clothes on the line don't w a v e in the wind
And clouds part when you step out your door
Somewhere nice and relaxing
A place of honey l o v e, and strawberry hearts
Of blueberry temptation
And raspberry thoughts
Somewhere f r e e and easy...like when you're fast asleep
I suppose that's why I like to dream.
It worked out really nicely, i didn't mean for the ending to work so well!
Here is the profile of the contest holder... [link]
and here is the contest
[link]Here is the image
This whole poem is for the contest
Please help
I guess maybe you guys could help me if I got enough favourites right? haha in my dreamsyou can fave anyway though...
does this poem have nice imagery?
do you think i should change anything about the poem? if yes, please describe
should I add anything? If yes, what? © 2010 - 2024 morgan-black-keys
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Fantastic imagery! 